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I lie here, shivering, thinking of my past
Staring at my slaughtered womb, the C-like gash
Rubbing at the bruises that are no longer there
Raped by you, and raped by air
You did it once, you tore a hole
Pleasured by tainting my soul
Left in a pit that a trapper dug
Caught, bear clamped, and obliterated
Stuck in a whole so vast
So steep
So deep
I'm broken
And you smile because you know i've not spoken
And I never will
The flashbacks make me scream
I wash my hands, yet always feel so unclean
I am inspired, possessed to destroy you,
Brick by brick the base will crumble,
And you will die in a panicking struggle,
But I will not kill you
You did this to yourself
So smile while you can
For soon, I will smile myself
Uhh i wrote this off of another poem I wrote. I don't really like the other one, it's written too... lightly for its purpose. So yeah i rewrote it... and I don't think I did any better... oh well
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MoonEnigma Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2006
I really like this
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MoonEnigma Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2006
I really like this
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I like this poem alot.. A farely weird thing to write about. But I like your use of words like these lines " So smile while you can
For soon, I will smile myself " it sorta rhymes.. or just flows well very good job.. Hope your not writing this because it has happend to you :-/
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SinisterLefty Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2003
thank you for the comment, and... i'd like not to comment bout stuff like that x.x
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Didn't expect you to I'm just saying sorry if it really did happen..... yea
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school Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
Sabrina my friend this deserves a :+favlove: this is haunting but in a way that gets people to understand: :( I miss collabing with you. I know you don't want to hear me say that but I do. I'm sorry Anyways nice job and uh don't say this is bad cuz I faved it for good reasons. !:!:!::!:!:!::!
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SinisterLefty Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2003
lol.. ok... and God, plz get over the no Collabing, i swear u bring it up agen ill stop talking to ya all 2gether x.x! lol
((hates nagging... is a hypocrit ^^;))
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memento-mori Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003   Writer
Aww I don't know what to say... it's beautiful sabrina. :hug:
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SinisterLefty Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
ty... but uhh ...i hope the whole rape part wasnt beautiful haha x.x
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memento-mori Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003   Writer
lol, silly.
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usa-chan2114 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
;_; Scary thing is.. I relate to that poem... it's really a good one..
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SinisterLefty Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
ty so much, uhh.. im sorry if u relate to it.. in the whole.. being raped part... real sorry
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usa-chan2114 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
You're welcome.
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blizpix Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
+ FAV That's like a professional poem, and thats an awesome design on the top with the split heart. Very inspiring.
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SinisterLefty Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
ty so much! :) means a lot to me ::big smile::
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skitzofrenicfox Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
Wow...that's...So haunting, yet such a great poem...
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SinisterLefty Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2003
thank you for your comment!! it means a lot to me
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